Tough Tough Love
by @wobyen
Liner Notes
6. This Won’t Have a Happy Ending
5. Tough Tough Love
2. I Don't Want to "Live It Up”
This one just flowed out. After having some writers block that was pretty nice.
If I ever turned this into an actual song (HA) I'd definitly want to extend the chorus or add a bridge or something. But this is good for now.
Lyrics
You and I made an empty promise Bound together by cruel fate One boy’s fine, may the other have mercy He struggles while we pray
But he’s an awful god he’s an awful god He watches that heart break
The river makes me cold here, I pour myself out in the lake
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I thought this time We’d have some kind of Luck
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Well you’ve got tough luck That’s some kind of luck
You think You’ve got it rough ? Thats tough tough luck
Tough tough love
You waited til I went to the office took things into your own hands
I came home sooner then expected Nearly ruined all your plans
But he’s an awful God he’s an awful God Somehow early but too late The River makes cold here I swallow my own weight
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Well you’ve got tough luck That’s some kind of luck
You think You’ve got it rough ? Thats tough tough luck
Tough tough love
Comments
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“ But he’s an awful god he’s an awful god/He watches that heart break” is a powerful lyrical moment. Believers and nonbelievers can access what that feels like. I like the music for this, too — it has a similar edge, to match the lyrics. Strong rhythm.
Thank you! Thats my favorite part of the song.
Wow. Intense lyrics and the tune to fit.
Thank you!
Is that a brushed snare?!? That's sick as hell. Love the harmony throughout the verses, and the melody note on 'rough' in the choruses, super crunchy. All about this!!
Thank you!!!!
Hell yeah, deep alternative vibes! Dig it!
I had to look up that genre 😂. Thanks!
Knocked it outa the park again, river boy. Hell yeah. What a good flow. I love coming in strong with those harmonies! That was unexpected and awesome. Really like this one my dude!!
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There are elements of this that remind me of various people, but I couldn't pin it down to one (There's definitely Simon & Garfunkel and 70's John Lennon in there). The chorus really stands out - quite catchy, but I get what you say about developing it a bit further. Certainly a good foundation if you do decide to develop it.
I love your voice on this song, very soulful delivery! & the harmonies are great too. I like when people go the extra mile & record vocal harmonies! The layered guitar lines & cymbal heavy chorus drumming provide a great atmosphere.
Thank you!!!
Awesome vocals, your tone and control is unbelievable. Those verses are incredible, layers and all.