Love those harmonies! They absolutely work. Anchored by a strong, simple and elegant instrumental foundation, too, can't discount that. I gotta say that you gave me some Freddie Mercury vibes at the end, and yes, I know that sounds insane, but it's what I feel, especially that final line.

Awesome track

I love your clear and bright guitar tone. Your voice is very nice, too! By the end I get some "White Album" vibes which is fine.

Thanks for your nice words, for leaving a comment on my "If there would be a fire". I am happy that you like the guitar tone. It's only a cheap Les Paul copy run through an Engl amp with a tiny bit of delay added. I thought it could sound a little bit sharper. But it is quite okay to sketch the song.

Heartfelt and passionate. The harmonies are good. And I imagine it took a lot of time to sing the song because of them. Good work.

It totally worked, what a great idea. I love the guitar bits, but the vocals upon vocals was really fun and cool. Great tune!

Oh I am totally digging the guitar pattern. "Fine" is such a loaded word and can be weaponized - so your title brought me here and I am glad I came. I am enjoying the interplay of the guitar pattern and your vocal melody. Your vocals are so expressive and a wonderful journey of emotions. Lovely harmonies. Wow and a round at the end - fabulous vocal chaos. OK that is the perfect ending - like a final "FINE" ! I listened 3 times and book marked it to listen to even more!

Hey man, I think you did write a pretty acoustic guitar song! Even with the screaming! Loved the round at the end (was that a round? Idk what the circle of fifths is) and really loved how it resolved right at the end. Nice dude.

Great tune, great lyrics. You're right, it builds really nicely and the tension between the auditory chaos and the seeming harmlessness of the lyric clicks in a satisfying way. Great work!

A Great John Lennon vibe to my ears. The vocals and harmonies are really tasteful and at the same time complex. I really like this one!!!!!