Persisting

by @headfirstonly TEAM

Persisting
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Liner Notes

I haven't sung anything since July. My main keyboard hadn't been used for so long, its clock battery had gone flat (and replacing it was a faff, I can tell you!) But here we are again, so let's enjoy ourselves (without AI, hence #zuzai) as best we can...

Lyrics

I think I'm done with anger I know I'm done with hate I'm done with folk in baseball caps That say make something great

Not really in the best of health Seen better days, it's true When things get bad I ask myself What would Dolly do?

It's quite all right to want to cry Remember those we've missed We must refuse to stand aside Not easily dismissed Keep things in the public eye End up on someone's list Might be a fragile butterfly But still, I will persist

Manipulated media? I want it all to stop I'm done with tech bro oligarchs And all their AI slop

We could each be heroes Stand up and play our part I still have faith in people And the goodness in their hearts

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The tension of your vocal melody over the rising chords is great. It builds a sense of anticipation for each line that follows.

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heavy. great use of rhyme and not-subtle imagery! i couldn't agree more.

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You've said so much of what I think in a much better way than I could and set it to lovely, dreamy music.

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Wise words! I like the atmospheric keyboards lurking behind the guitar. Nice bass as well. The horn/twinkly thing section is excellent!

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Nice. Reminds me of pre-Machine Head Deep Purple, although obviously the lyrics are a lot more cogent.

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Awesome! Fragile butterflies for the win. I share your opinions and I will persist with you.

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Most underated and unused word is this title! Nice Dolly do use as well! Great message here and it rollicks along nicely

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My favorite lines of the song are “I think I’m done with anger” and then the “What would Dolly do?” Somehow these two make a giant tent for all the complicated inconsistencies of being human in a world of other people being human too. And the music swings me along like a cradle at a march.

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@gm7

You always have some humor in your songs..ie "I'm done with folk in baseball caps". well done. But we are in different times !

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@sbs

"What would Dolly do?" - love it! Love the energy - that slinky vibe. I can see a rocker Dolly slinking on stage in time to this music with all her swag.

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What would Dolly do does seem to be a good question to ask ourselves. And nice to get that butterfly reference in. I'm done with all this too, and while I don't know what good it does to sing and shout about it I'm going to persist anyway and I'm glad you are doing it too!

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Wow Chris, I love this!! Right from the first two lyric lines, I knew I was in for a treat.

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Very good but lyrically and musically. I guess it's only me but I'm getting some diet Howard Devoto/Magazine vibes in places. Nice bass and what did you do to the guitar tones? They've got a very nice grainy but still warm texture.

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Some of the guitars were fed in to my Hologram Electronics Microcosm. Glorious for glitchy reverb.

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Yes, yes, and again, yes. Not only a delight to have some high class HFO reverb caressing my ears once more, but damn, those lyrics are so on point. 💯

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I read the lyrics obviously with a feeling of familiarity and solidarity. Listening to it later warm and fuzzy from the familiar epic swelling sounds so textured & crunchy in a good way! A showcase of humanity inside industry and granite.

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raises fist in solidarity Hear, hear! This is so great. I love the layered vocals and the way it all builds through the chorus. A powerful start for sure!

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@b3nut

"Might be a fragile butterfly but still I will persist" brings it home for me. If for no other reason than to prevent the encroaching fascists from trying to make us into them...we can't let them change us no matter what. Off to a good start here!

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"Stand up and play our part" reminds me of the old Moebius comic "Cauchemar Blanc" in which a community stops a gang of neo-nazis by simply being a version of themselves that is unafraid - without otherwise being any different. An odd association, perhaps, but I like it when songs awaken a thought in me.

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I really enjoyed this. I totally get the lyrics for sure!! And as others have mentioned, "what would Dolly do?" is always worth asking, especially in these troubled times.

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What would Dolly do is indeed a question worth asking! That bass is wonderful. I love the way you present the chorus. Great solo break!

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Nailed it. This is THE anthem for our times'

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id love to be done with anger but alas...i'm still working on it. great shoutout to dolly. i hope you're well...i'm not changing a battery but i'm about to re-string a 12 string guitar today...so that will be a faff in it's own right (american hoping he used faff right...) very cool arrangement and sounds so good as usual. cheers.

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