Imperfect
by @rshakesp
Liner Notes
#playingwithchords #dreampop a little ditty I put together after experimenting with some weird chords.
Lyrics
For what once was imperfect You went too far And all because you're worth it You're such a star
So get your life aligned And try to dumb your ego down It's so profound
Your self belief is monstrous It blocks the moon Seek some release and heal And do it soon!
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Interesting set of lyrics, nice arrangement, and I do like that vocal! Great job! ❤️
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Awesome opening with that little riser texture. Really strong vocal too, particularly love the little falsetto moments. “Your self belief is monstrous / It blocks the moon” are super lines. Very cool song, Rich!
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having another listen, very hooky indeed!
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A little prog quality here with the dreamy pop. I like the encouragement to seek healing soon!
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That is a wonderful character study and great anti-pop song.
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I like how it has a slowy down quality that is so profoundishly amusing. the words also imply and add some more to the quirkiness of this prelude
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Cool! I like the kind of hesitant drumbeat here. It pulled me along through the song. The shaker is so distinct at this tempo. Great lyrics, too -- especially that last stanza.