If They Will Hear It

by @chrissteele · @mikegtz

Liner Notes

A Fawm Collaboration with @mikegtz ‪. We had fun with this, both in the storytelling and in the composition. Hope you enjoy! #collab

Mike: I thought it would be interesting to compose a song where even though your relationship is over, you still miss your partner's parents because they were really nice people and your ex is lucky to have them. Chris did a good job of rolling with this idea. We started with the chorus lines, which Chris created.

Lyrics

If They Will Hear It Chorus: I hope this gets to you ok And all is well with you Please say hi to your folks to me If they will hear it (C - D - Am)

I sent the last of your books to you The ones that both of us read That quiet time at the beginning of our love Noise and clutter now instead And if you are feeling spiteful now Asking me to go away Communication broken down We should talk another day (chorus)

I am grateful for the time we had You have made me stronger You are strong in ways that I could never be But I can’ t continue any longer You have the nicest folks, you know That isn’t always true You need those people in your life Who would do anything for you (chorus)

(Bridge) I still reach for my phone some nights, Then put it face down slow It once was just like breathing But it isn’t anymore Maybe they’ll ask about me Just say you hear I’m doing fine

(tag) I’ll be gone but here in spirit Please say hi to your folks if they will hear it.

Comments

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A very interesting premise for a song, good lyric write, really shows the internal emotions happening. A nice melodic - and sometimes dissonant - guitar accompaniment works well with the vocal melody.

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There's so much in these lyrics, stated and left unsaid. Chris' guitar and the plaintive style really captures the resignation of the situation. Great collab guys.

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Thanks, Ken. It was our first time collaboratiing.

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Thank you, Ken. This was a fun one to write, and also a great way to try to reflect Mike's great lyrics in a way that would appropriately hit in a song.

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Can't see the video here. Says it's private.

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Chris, we have to unlock the video .

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Should be fixed. Sorry about that - I saw it as finished on my dashboard (because I am author) but had been saved in youtube as draft. Come to me for more tips on "problems to avoid..."

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Thanks , Chris!

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