silky delivery and the long drone end ! drunk or not its a slightly dodgy reflective piece which make it work

Your voice is as soothing as a bedtime story.

lol, love the formatting of the lyrics. Nice dark ambiance. Reverb adds quite a lot of mood, and the guitar is a fantastic addition that plays off of the vocal delivery. Almost thought I heard an organ, but probably just the overtones from the reverb. Really great track.

That was a fun listen! Your irregular pacing in delivering the lyrics was great. The extended final tones sound a bit like someone who has been drinking and forgot to turn something off -- nice touch!

Love the drunken vocal delivery, amazingly put together short tune here!

That is an amazing fragment. It was very evocative of a lot of imagery, a whole mood, and I really liked it.

Maybe then I’d learn the lessons of…. Great lyric. It sounds like a drunken thought process .Love your voice, great skirmish. Thanks for sharing

Too short....then again, you never drag things out. I have never been bored at any point listening to one of your songs, and I cant say that about very many people.

A cute little love song! And yes, you sound a bit drunken! 😃