Fast & Loose

by @smudge

Skirmish: No nouns, no pronouns. (@bergie)
Fast & Loose
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Liner Notes

I was laughing so hard tears started coming out as I wrote this. So hard not to have nouns!!! Im not a mando player but took a stab anyway!

Lyrics

Fast & Loose

Delicious yummy jumping Delightful quaint Nutritious chronic humping And again

Delicious yummy jumping Delightful quaint Nutritious chronic humping And again

Sweet Sweet Frenetic Leap fantastic Breathe bombastic Writing fast and loose

Sweet Frenetic Leap fantastic Breathe bombastic Writing fast and loose

Delicious yummy jumping Delightful quaint Nutritious chronic humping And again

Delicious yummy jumping Delightful quaint Nutritious chronic humping And again

Sweet Sweet Frenetic Leap fantastic Breathe bombastic Writing fast and loose

Sweet Frenetic Leap fantastic Breathe bombastic Writing fast and loose

Comments

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How to get a sex manual past the coming Fascist censor. 😁😁

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Yep, "Nutritious chronic humping" is what made me laugh so hard lol!" Fun!

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I got some serious R.E.M. vibes. Nice work. Beautiful phrases lyrically and phonetically interesting. Really nice skirmish.

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Fun song and take on the challenge. Fun pause too. So, when people are in a bad mood, they just need to listen to your song, they wouldn't be able to have straight or angry faces. Beautiful work. Love it.

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@bergie

"Nutritious chronic humping" has me GEEKED hahaha. Fantastic. Love your enjambment on the "sweet -- frenetic leap -- fantastic breathe -- bombastic"

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Thanks so much! Glad u like "nutritious chronic humping" hahha! :)

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@val

No nouns or pronouns? Wow. I'm not sure I could pull that off. That's really cool. You got your point across with some fun and image rich phrases. I'm loving the mando. Sounds great.

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There are some great words here, and you have combined them in a delightful way. "Nutritious chronic humping" is my favorite phrase of the day! :) Pretty melody and (mandolin?)!

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Thanks a lot! I have to admit "Nutritious chronic humping" is what made me laugh so hard lol!

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