This is such a great lyric! It is a wonderful re-make of familiar fairy tale images that creates a poignant heart tugging sentiment. Brilliant chorus! Love the melody the delivers it perfectly, capturing the sentiment.

Sweet fairy tale retelling. I like the personification of the mirror telling her to find herself in the broken shards. The instrumental with the clock was a nice touch!

I love the fairy tale theme woven through the lyrics, a really clever concept executed wonderfully. And the music does a great job bringing an uplifting and comforting energy - it has me feeling that even though things are a mess for our Cinderella right now, she's going to get through this and ultimately she'll be okay. Great collab!

Thanks again for bringing this to life Paul! I detect a hopefulness in your vocal and empathy too for her. I like that musical interlude around the clock striking twelve! Very sensitively delivered overall. Nicely done!

Just as people sample different bits of music together , i feel like this is a delightful patchwork of snow white, cindarella and probably a couple of others I dont know - it conjures up almost a brand new fairytale, in a delightful piece of music - Another neat discovery for me and congratulations to both of you!

Loved Kristi's lyrics and I'm enjoying your collaboration. So elegant, beautiful and musical in every sense. Love it. Wonderful music, singing, playing. I love the clock striking music and the whole atmosphere of light-hearted, enjoyable song.

I recorded a song today with a line about looking in the mirror--very different from this classic take, though. Great collaboration! ❤️

paul's sensitive handling of kristi's wise lyrics gets across that dark truth that falseness in love can pull you off cloud nine and into the deep pit of self-reassessment.