Oh, I'm loving your phrasing and melodic rhythm overtop of that insistent guitar! It builds a lot of tension mirrored in the lyrics. Painful subject matter, really well handled.

Impressive skirmish result! You do such excellent things with rhymes, compellingly laying out the situation. and the "I don't believe that love" is beautiful both in sentiment and melody.

Nicely laid out - told almost from the side - i guess it takes a healing process to get to that stage of writing! I think this is worth investing in ! Nice

I have nightmares of broken friendships from decades ago, and I've had some hard moments too... So I can connect here.

But that messages of freed up space, it's the truth! I am starting to rebuild almost my entire network of friends and I see some real beauty starting to form finally after years of isolation. :')

Beautiful song! Skirmish success. Nice playing too!

I agree. It is a keeper. A very complete song which flows well and keeps to the point. Good skirmish.

This is a keeper! The constant downpicking, the chord change on the fourth line of the verses, the refrain that incorporates the title... Good all the way through.

Wonderful music. And I so feel the lyrics. Great skirmish.

Great fast skirmish write. The guitar and vocal melody are simple and effective. I could hear some harmonies in the choruses. Well done.

I have definitely been there. Relationships are often difficult because of the investment that is then seemingly for nothing. Everything changes us and hopefully helps us grow though. Nice write!