Salvation

by @jwhanberry

Skirmish: Salvation (@deandra)
Salvation
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Liner Notes

#noai #skirmish #electronic #fawmtronica #salvation

When I saw the prompt, as an atheist, it didn't speak to me but with the help of my dear friend rhymezone.com I found a vocabulary that I think works for my spiritual experience. I hope I can be forgiven for breaking the rule against skirmishing before breakfast.

Music done now.

Synths: Vital Ascension Big Bottom Babylon Electric Grand 80 Constructive criticism is always welcome. Tell me all about it!

No AI was intentionally used in the creation of this music.

Note: Skirmish: 1 hour to write and record ©2026 John W Hanberry (ASCAP) All Rights Reserved

Lyrics

Salvation

Salvation Are you blessed yet Sanctification A righteous bet Resurrection To be born again Divinity of no sin As I begin.

Salvation Is in my hands Step by step to the promised land Makin' my way to eternal grace Exalted smile on my face

Ch Exaltation Divinization Regeneration Will come to me in time Meditation Inspiration Restoration Liberation is mine

I have faith It'll all work out Preordained Ain't no doubt I'll be delivered Heaven sent Take me all the way To enlightenment.

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©2026 John W Hanberry (ASCAP) All Rights Reserved

Comments

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Great sound: to me has a David Bowie vibe

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Nice sound. What I hear in the music is like a focused determination. It’s like a step beyond the potential and direction in the lyrics.

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Great take on the prompt. Those rhymes are really amazing. And your production is pretty epic. The metal vocals on the chorus are really cool.

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“Salvation is in my hands” lines up with my own view of things, too. Really nice work!

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Thanks for your comments. "Salvation" now has a demo if you want to hear it. https://fawm.org/songs/320293

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I like the angle of finding one’s way as a way to make use of the otherwise esoteric jargon, and the step-by-step approach as a way of slowing things down. It really has a steady progression or the kind of slow build that a rock fan like myself can appreciate.

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Thanks for your comments. "Salvation" now has a demo if you want to hear it. https://fawm.org/songs/320293

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Great lyrics and I love your take on this. "Salvation Is in my hands" is such a powerful line.

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Thanks for your comments. "Salvation" now has a demo if you want to hear it. https://fawm.org/songs/320293

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Thank you for being a part of the skirmish. Great job with the lyric, I especially liked: "Salvation Is in my hands Step by step to the promised land." What a friend, that Rhymezone! :)

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Thanks for your comments. "Salvation" now has a demo if you want to hear it. https://fawm.org/songs/320293

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Even though I do have a religious side, I am just as intrigued by the secular definition of salvation, as merely being to save one from ruin or destruction, so I think there are so many non-religious ways to go with this, too. I love how much related vocabulary you've packed in here, but in a musical way. Really cool!

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Thanks for your comments. "Salvation" now has a demo if you want to hear it. https://fawm.org/songs/320293

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