Really like the vocals, they feel improvised a time. Raw and effective with emotion. Love the twisted rope line. Simple production suits it perfectly. Nice work.

The depth of your vocals here, it's so rich and textured. Love that chordal change in the chorus. It's so simple but effective. You're so tailored to these kind of quiet, desperate whispers in the form of songs. Paints a beautiful, intimate atmosphere, I wish I could be as folksy and singular as you and your guitar! Great work, again (and at this point I think I can say, as usual)

Oh the lyric “I won’t cry through these frozen eyes” is just so poignant. I really appreciate your accompaniment, it is beautiful. The chordal shifts on “what a mess” are really musically interesting to my ear. Nice listen!

Love the fast-moving fingerpicking guitar (wish I could play like that) compared with the relaxed and spacious vocal. The music itself is pretty "happy" sounding and contrasts nice to the lyrics which are more melancholic with glimmers of hope and determination to get yourself better after the lost love. Overall it's a feel-good song for me, accepting of the current moment and taking steps to feel better "I get in bed a quarter to nine".

Pretty little ditty. I like this!

Only constructive criticism, I can make is to remove the word "these" from the last line of each verse, since they are sung quickly and are superfluous. But ok to leave them there.