absolutely incredible my dude! everything about it. the lyrics ( GLUED am i to your words; ironic, maybe), the melody, the moodiness, your voice (i love your voice). this really inspires me to write my next song about words also, because I have such a love/hate relationship with them, and you did this so masterfully

European blues, you say? Well why not. Love that descending minor progression. As others have said, the ‘rose/idiots’ lines are stunning, worth the admission fee alone. Reappropriating some Yeats is such a nice wink to the theme. Love how drily you intone those lines at the end. You’re kind of like a wise sage singing cryptic lines to an undeserving world. Well done mate!

Very nice vocal performance ... lyrics are strange and draw you in ... love phrases like "hand an ape a lever" and "a rope-swing tire. I like the reverby guitar as well.

This lyric is not in the form of conventional lyric with rhyme and strict order and yet you make all that stuff superfluous somehow. It is also a deeper lyric than ususal but has its advantage of a simple catchy song to parade it which is also odd. So it has a lot of charm. Which I like. I started to think it from the child's doggerel 'sticks and stones etc' and then to poetry being great for dreamers but not realists. But the falcon lines lost me, I dont know this man Yeats. I'm not asking you to explain it I just wanted you to know the words intrigued me and made me wanted to make the effort.

Yeah, I want a t-shirt that says:

The first person to compare a woman to a rose was a poet
Then it’s idiots all the way down

Such a great song, from the lyrics to the vocals to the production... listened a few times!

Love your vocal delivery. It’s so so cool! Following…

Clever and mysterious and intriguing, especially the "I know you're listening" line. I laughed at "The first person to compare a woman to a rose was a poet/Then it’s idiots all the way down" Aside from the fascinating lyric, it's such a great delivery, phrasing and sound, the slappy delay works so well to this. A track I immediately felt the urge to listen to on repeat.

Love your vocal delivery so much! Especially on "I wanted poetry... once," and that rhythm guitar just hits so nice! The speaking at the end wraps it up in a neat bow so well! Woah so happy to have come across this!

The performance is great! I found myself glued to the lyrics on this one.

Thank you! European blues ! Perfect description and so refreshing :-)

Love the lyrics and your vocal is terrific over them. Great job! ❤️

Love the way you've sorta reshaped bejar's style into something very stark and slightly disconcerting, it's super captivating!

The "I know you are listening part" has a hypnotic quality to it mysterious quality to it. The combination of the chords and your delivery just adds to it that "something" that is hard to explain. Your vocals also sound really great. Could never have guessed you are under the weather.

that is thought provoking if you are being literal or maybe just a really nice song to enjoy! oooo i was listening. hmmm european blues i winder what defines it! if its like your songs i will listen to more

perhaps you need to attend this https://europeanbluesunion.com/14th-european-blues-challenge-2026/

Because I'm of a certain age, the chord run reminds me of Walk, Don't Run by the Ventures. Beyond that ... pretty abstract, but I like the domestication lines. But what does the falcon hear?

so are you saying tha yeats was wrong...and that we will always being under authoritarian control..and that inevitable is what is neccessary to maintain civilized society? i can listen to the song with that in mind, or just forget aboutt he falcon and the falconer and enjoy the song on your own merits, which are considerable.

If European blues is actually a thing, it may as well be this. Nice job! Really like the guitar sound and the lyrics