The intro to a dystopian epic...this could be a 10 minute masterpiece if you wanted...

short and direct with a lovely voice and pretty backing music.

Straight to the point as you should with a topic like this. Those high strings sound unnerving in the best possible way. Packs a real weight and your voice sounds genuinely concerned.

the word economy is incredible and the music bed is so very lovely. i'd like to hear your final FAWM output stitched together into a 1 track album just moving through these vignettes you're assembling. i think it'd be super cool...not telling you what to do, you do you, of course, but that's how i hear it as i've listened to your songs back-to-back. they work like scenes and i really dig it.

Oh, this is excellent. Understated and powerful. I can hear this expanding into a sort of round situation with the vocal lines layered over one another. Beautiful!

yup a good lyric based around the "what will i do when they come for you" Nice musical soundscape. if you wait there will be no one left to help when they come for you

Simple and effective. A call to action and a warning about how it will spread. I really like the couplet structure; this and politics is great!