Indisputibeautiful

by @daveescoffery

Challenge: MADE-UP WORDS

Liner Notes

This song is obviously dedicated to my indisputably beautiful wife @caitlin who inspires me in so many ways every day! Not only is she gorgeous, but she's incredibly talented (seriously, go listen to her songs, both solo and via the band Hermosa with @ampersandman). Beautiful on the inside and out!

Musically, I was going for an 80s rock, Cars-ish kind of sound. Note that this is a work in progress. The guitar is a bit wonky in places, the transitions need to be cleaned up, and the drum loop isn't aligned with the sections of the song. But I was so excited about how it was sounding that I couldn't wait to post it here! So here she is!

#madeupwords #thecars

Lyrics

Verse 1 Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? That wouldn't be fair to June, July, or August. Looking at you, well, you blow me away. Saying anything else would be dishonest. Everything about the way you look Works together in perfect harmony. Your hair, your lips, your nose, your eyes are like a hook, Catching my heart totally artfully.

Chorus You have the greatest smile I've ever seen. It lights me up more than caffeine. Your face, it brings me so much joy There's just one word I can employ: You're indisputibeautiful. Indesputibeautiful.

Verse 2 It's not just on the outside that you're magnificent. You have the kind of beauty that glows from within. Getting to know your heart, I feel you're heaven sent. And we share the same brain like a siamese twin. The thing that I see most is you're full of love. Plus, you're as wise as the wisest sages. You keep my heart safe. You're a gift from above. So, let's make ours a love for the ages.

Chorus You have the greatest smile I've ever seen. It lights me up more than caffeine. Your face, it brings me so much joy There's just one word I can employ: You're indisputibeautiful. Indesputibeautiful.

Bridge You may say "That's not a word," But it's the only one I've heard That even comes close to describing you. English is a poor excuse, As a language, it don't have the juice To convey what I know is true: You're indisputibeautiful. Indesputibeautiful.

Chorus You have the greatest smile I've ever seen. It lights me up more than caffeine. Your face, it brings me so much joy There's just one word I can employ: You're indisputibeautiful. Indesputibeautiful.

Comments

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I love it, it's catchy and it gives you energy! I love the title "Indisputebeautiful," no need to look any further, it's a great find.

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Love it!! You two are the cutest. Creative lyrics. Digging the Cars vibe.

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This sounds great - nice lo-fi clarity. Reminds me of a brattier Cleaners From Venus - have you heard them? The made-up word is catchy, charming, and perfect for the sentiment. You can hear how much fun you’re having with it.

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I don't know Cleaners From Venus, but I'm heading to look them up right now! Just from the name, I want to hear more!

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Nice word! And I think you've definitely succeeded with the Cars feel, musically and perhaps even lyrically (maybe the music is making me think that).

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I adore the rhymes. Sweet and witty!

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This is so damn sweet I can’t even! Can’t wait to hear the live version with @caitlin !!

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I love the Cars vibe! The guitar work is awesome - it's definitely a hook. The lyrics are sweet and humorous. Very from the heart. This is a jam!

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I cannot wipe the smile off my face listening to this indisputibeautiful work of art!! If only everyone could experience love like this. I can't wait to harmonize with you on this one - and debut it at our Valentine's Day house concert!

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Such a great song and tribute to @caitlin. Has really put a smile on my place. I love the arrangement. There’s a mid 90s alt rock vibe which I dig. Awesome work

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It is sounding good! & what a lovely sentiment!! I feel like a vocal harmony would work really well on this one.

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I had that same thought! Next steps...!

[FAWM]