How the Other Half Live
by @berni1954
Skirmish: Finish the Fragments (@robinleaf)Liner Notes
#12StringGuitar #folk #singersongwriter
Unbelievably, this morning I discovered a piece of paper in a drawer in my bedside table that had some words scribbled in pencil. I reckon this was one of those nights in which you write down some lines that had been going around your head in your semi-conscious state and then in the morning you forget you've done it.
Anyway,when I saw the prompt for this skirmish I said aloud "Serendipity!"
The lines, I had written were the last two lines of the CHORUS
Instrument: Fender Acoustic 12 String F-5-12
Lyrics
INTRO: (F) (E) (Am)
(Am) I volunteered for a (Dm) couple of nights To help (Em) out at a local soup (Am) kitchen I naively thought there'd be (G) gratitude But was sur(F)prised at (E) some of the (Am) bitching
(F) Used to being treated like (C) nobodies I (Dm) sensed their suspicion of this (Am) newbie There (F) must be a catch if (C) something was free One (G) guy even asked what's in it for (Am) me
(Am) Some nodded to me as I (Dm) filled their bowl But with a (Em) mood of veiled ag(Am)gression I shouldn't have expected (G) smiles and thanks From folks (F) caught in the (E) latest de(Am)pression
CHORUS
BRIDGE (C) I was so young, my (G) innocence complete I had (C) never seen this side of our (G) town I was (C) left with a feeling (G) of defeat And weeks (F) after I was (E) still feeling (Am) down
(Am) I couldn't get my head round (Dm) sleeping rough With the (Em) bitter winter nights drawing (Am) near A foul-smelling cardboard (G) box for a bed Haunted (F) nightly by (E) justified (Am) fears
CHORUS
Comments
I love serendipity! This is such a great folk song. It sounds so classic. Really solid lyrics I love the melody and the chords feel so deep. I love the 12 string. Sounds magical and dark and shimmery. 🧡🧡🧡
Happy you liked it. My 12 string is a favourite of mine.
Great perspective and wonderful reflective insight in the song and your vocals and chord progression delivers the sentiment well. It addresses the savior complex fallacies well where we expect gratitude or appreciation for the brief stints of volunteer work we do to serve others, when in reality, when we serve others in need we are often one of many who step in for a brief moment and no matter what we do in that moment it doesn’t alter the landscape of life someone else faces and can subsequently be met with resistance or disdain - understanding that and accepting the limits of our contributions can help us serve with humility and grace without expectations of gratitude from others - and hopefully help us build a more longstanding trusting relationship where respect is earned and people are valued. It makes me cringe a bit when I see individuals or groups do a boat load for others over the holidays when during the rest of the year they walk quickly past the people they given themselves pats on the backs for serving at Christmas. Admittedly I have been guilty of that hat in the past but hopefully have learned more humility and empathy over the years.
Brilliant dissection of my song That's exactly what I was going for. I was a social worker for a short while and saw a lot of people like you describe.
This is a really solid folk song. Very classic sound with the smart chords and melody choices. Interesting story too. There are all types of people out there. We can make excuses for behavior. I mean we all do, but I've found that being grateful no matter what the situation is a better path. I'm still working on gratitude at all times, but it is the goal.
Thanks. My narrator would have liked to continue helping, but the reality was all too much for him. He'd led a sheltered life, poor chap. Newbies are often viewed with suspicion at first. If he had hung around a bit longer he might have sensed a better attitude towards him.
Yup and so it goes. Seems ingratitude but oft it's where they are coming from. Heard this often from people. Well captured in song