"unsolicited advice (10 things)" : FAWM

unsolicited advice (10 things)

3 days ago by @gordon

Skirmish: Ten (@hmstreetteam)

unsolicited advice (10 things)

gordon

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Liner Notes

#onetake #singersongwriter #advice I liked this prompt so much I did another one, different subject but still based around the number 10

Lyrics

Ten ways to show you really care

Make an effort with your hair
I mean tidy yourself up down there
Get in shape before attempting swimwear

And that’s just for starters No need to be a martyr

But think about things before you speak
Criticise others? You just look weak
Spare a thought for your neighbours
Not everyone has had your favours

And that’s just to be going on with I’m losing count, so many myths

And the last three you must consider 8. Be serious at work, no one likes a kidder 9. Treat others with respect and grace 10. Always try to earn your place

And that’s all there is for now You never listen anyhow

Comments

@marthie 3d

Oops I think I have broken each of these many times! Sounds like a mirror song one can sing to yourself every morning getting ready for the day.

@artie 3d

Oh wow, really nicely done and such a cool creative take on the prompt.

@hmstreetteam 3d

Such a good way to present a character — so many traits come out between the lines. I enjoyed this!

@joeycyclone 3d

A great second interpretation of the prompt. Wasn’t sure where you were taking this after 1-3 but I like how you started tongue in cheek and then delivered a more reflective message