You Turn Cruel
by @lbrewington
Liner Notes
linear
love unknown. love found. love lost. what's the difference?
detail
9.6.2o26 fawm sprint ii
#acoustic #singersongwriter #fawm notes
was debating changing the hook to be when you turn cold, but i think i'm sticking with cruel. didn't catch the double entendre until i had finished writing the song, o well. a slight hiccup on the start of the final outro on this take.
Lyrics
[c3] e g a e
she look me in the eye after hearing all my lies she said boy you'such a fool
asking all these questions like this is a school got to be cool to be cool
[chorus] d a e warms all i've ever been
d a e waking up to next to you feels like a sin
g d a e over and over i've found my way through d a e i turn blue when you go cruel i said you turn me blue when you turn cruel
it's been a while since we've been apart fever in this cabin, two sweaty hearts i can feel your pulse, in the way that you breath broke down, breaking up, gonna feel the breeze
[chorus] [bridge] g a e i aint saying i need honey words
never expected warm boos
but you got the best of me
now i'm beggin for that tenderness
[outro] cold's all you've ever know ...
Comments
Lee - I’m so caught up in the way you sing this and the way you strum that I’m only half listening to the words. You can just hear how completely hooked this singer is. And then those cold and cruel words sound so cruel and cold.
Yeah, this takes me back to a woman I once knew with a cruel streak and the vibe of the melody and chord changes fit that to a T. I kinda feel like 'When You Turn Cold' is a whole 'nother song.
Dont you luv a bunch of internal rhymes. Love this style! good reasons to be blue in this this lyric! but not with this song!
I'm not sure of the right word for it, but this song has a great flow to it, Lee. Everything feels in place. I esp. love the first verse and the one that begins "it's been a while..." And "sweaty hearts" is just awesome. And I like your vocal tone here; I liked your higher range, too, which to me had a yearning quality. This has more experience and authority in a way. Hey, different sounds for different songs!