You’re going to have to plant someone in the next open mic crowd to utter the dreaded heckle, because this deserves to be played - both as an excellent response, but also it’s thoroughly beautiful in its own right. Lovely harmonies (you should do more of those!), and the piano adds loads without being domineering. I also love how you get such a different feel to the last lines of the verse and chorus, just by switching from a major 7th to the minor. Very subtle and clever songwriting there, kudos mate!

this would be a wonderful response to a request for freebird. and it also works as a stand alone song, without the musical reference. i like the big sound you get on the chorus with your added harmonies

What an incredible way to start your sprint. You had me from the first line, I'm getting too old to act my age. I must confess that I sang along to the instrumental break. If I leave here tomorrow, would you still remember me? It scanned perfectly. Bon sprinting

Nice solid intro! great opening line! Got a really nice flow to the whole song! nice harmonising as well! and hey who doesn't love FMaj7 . Really nice song!