I Just Tried Out for the World Cup of Song
by @vermuffin
Skirmish: The World Cup of Song (@dudachris)Liner Notes
Well, one of my goals for this song sprint was to do at least one #skirmish, so I decided to jump in early! The prompt "World Cup of Song" was tricky for me because I don't really watch any sports, but then I imagined what it would be like to try out for the world cup of song.. and be rejected.
I had the chorus and both verses figured out by the end of the hour, but had to take a break to take the dog out and eat breakfast. So.. better late than never! Wound up with this silly little #folk song about the silly things that us songwriters do. The bridge definitely needs some zhuzhing but I consider this first one an exercise in getting the rust out!
Lyrics
V1 Been doing three rounds object writing a day and just started over reading Artist’s way My wrists has arthritis from all the free hand I even follow rick rubin’s instagram…
Chorus Cause I tried out for the World Cup of song They told me that all of my lyrics were wrong. They told me that 1 four and 5 were a bore So I packed up my notebooks and walked out the door.
V2 My dreams have been dashed Like iced cubes in the rain I meditate daily to deal with the pain the sting of rejection has rendered me blind I guess I’ll go back to the ol’ corporate grind
Chorus
Bridge Those stuck up judges don’t understand me Just because I didn’t graduate from Berkelee
Chorus
Comments
Nice feel, and smooth picking .... it has the vibe of resignation. Good prosody!
Well done Ethan...An entertaining little ditty. Cohesive and humorous...
Charming picking pattern. I especially like the minor sound, the bridge, and the chord progression melody on:
“They told me that 1 four and 5 were a bore So I packed up my notebooks and walked out the door.”
This works very well as a competition ballad. It’s nice to look at the consensus experience of starting out with high hopes, then not getting far at all.
very funny ditty..love these type of songs. The chorus is killer. Well done