"Fragments" : FAWM

Fragments

8 hours ago by @gordon

Skirmish: Fragments (@robinleaf)

Fragments

gordon

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Liner Notes

#skirmish #folky Ah finally able to upload! Hurrah! Whilst waiting for the team to sort out the website (thanks guys) I had a go at this skirmish. Nice prompt!

Lyrics

Fragments of a moment Slipping through my mind Details kind of hazy Not much left behind

We were different people Would we recognise ourselves? So hard to remember What the world was like back then

Fragments slowly drifting away Like vapour in the air Entropy is all around Nothing lasts forever

Still fragments of a moment Linger in my mind If not the sights then the sounds How much of it is real?

Fragments of a moment Slipping through my mind Fragments

Comments

@nfshakespeare 6h

Bonus points for entropy. I had enough trouble just coming up with lyrics in the hour. Even more points for you.

@musicsongwriter 7h

Very connected to the prompt song, lovely to listen to. Thoughtful and likable. Beautiful singing and playing.

@jem 7h

This has such a lovely dreamy quality - like what you might feel when you're still only half awake and things surface then slip away. I like the slow pace and the melody fits the subject very well. great start!

@metalfoot 8h

Lovely tune here -- had me hooked from the first line. Solid lyric too! I'm not surprised that you had such an amazing take to the prompt :)

@newukenewyork 8h

A dreamy lyric! Nice response to the prompt. I love the word and concept of entropy. It fits well here. The guitar is sweet and the melody a bit yearning.