Axolotl

by @savvyaz

Skirmish: Exotic Animal (@atornberg) Challenge: SAWTOOTH MELODY

Liner Notes

My first skirmish of the month! I was instantly inspired by the prompt. My family has quite a collection of pets, and my son’s axolotl is always a hit at my homeschool Animal Encounters class.

I also decided to write to the Sawtooth Melody challenge (now that I know what that means) as well as #capochallenge and #fmajaminchallenge (capo 2, playing the G shape for F, and for Am I’m playing a B7 shape because I can’t do bar chords yet). I also #madeupwords. Fun song! I can’t wait to share it with my kids!

The lyrics are an acrostic poem and then the yodel-y chorus just materialized. I’m excited to add this poem to my growing collection of children’s animal acrostic poems.

I just realized that I misspelled it in the acrostic, LOL. Definitely due for some editing.

Lyrics

Axolotl

A xolotl is fun to say and eX tra fun to keep. He L ikes to wave his tiny arms when I come O ver to see him. T ranslucent skin and fancy frills - he’s a swimming superstar! Our L ittle axolotl has a lotl of my heart.

Axolotl axolotl Little lottle loo Axolotl axolotl I’ve gotta lotl love for you

Comments

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This is cute! I like the lyrical acrostic! My daughter loved it!

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Your daughter’s approval makes me exponentially happy! Thank you

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Very ingenious turn of lyrics. Sweet song. I love the multi layered meanings and themes.

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Thank you! 😊

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Such fun lyrics. I love the way you combined a ton of different ideas all into one song. #efficient

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Hashtag overachiever, amiright? ;) Thanks for listening! It was fun to write.

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Aawww, I have Axolotls too. Well, my daughter wanted them and then outgrew that phase, so I'm stuck with them. But I feel that song, it's just so tender, warm and beautiful.

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That scares me a little. My son is not allowed to outgrow any of his needy creatures! Thank you so much for your kind words!

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@ruby

This is great. A lot of fun and it covers a lot of challenges too. I am indeed very fond of Axolotls they are incredibly cute. And having a lotl heart is fab. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks for listening!

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@mikeb

What a fun little song, very imaginative way to do a skirmish and multiple challenges at the same time!

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Thank you. 😊 I keep a running list of challenges and prompts I would like to try, so I think they sneak into my psyche while I’m writing!

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