Axolotl
by @savvyaz
Skirmish: Exotic Animal (@atornberg) Challenge: SAWTOOTH MELODYLiner Notes
My first skirmish of the month! I was instantly inspired by the prompt. My family has quite a collection of pets, and my son’s axolotl is always a hit at my homeschool Animal Encounters class.
I also decided to write to the Sawtooth Melody challenge (now that I know what that means) as well as #capochallenge and #fmajaminchallenge (capo 2, playing the G shape for F, and for Am I’m playing a B7 shape because I can’t do bar chords yet). I also #madeupwords. Fun song! I can’t wait to share it with my kids!
The lyrics are an acrostic poem and then the yodel-y chorus just materialized. I’m excited to add this poem to my growing collection of children’s animal acrostic poems.
I just realized that I misspelled it in the acrostic, LOL. Definitely due for some editing.
Lyrics
Axolotl
A xolotl is fun to say and eX tra fun to keep. He L ikes to wave his tiny arms when I come O ver to see him. T ranslucent skin and fancy frills - he’s a swimming superstar! Our L ittle axolotl has a lotl of my heart.
Axolotl axolotl Little lottle loo Axolotl axolotl I’ve gotta lotl love for you
Comments
Your daughter’s approval makes me exponentially happy! Thank you
Very ingenious turn of lyrics. Sweet song. I love the multi layered meanings and themes.
Thank you! 😊
Such fun lyrics. I love the way you combined a ton of different ideas all into one song. #efficient
Hashtag overachiever, amiright? ;) Thanks for listening! It was fun to write.
Aawww, I have Axolotls too. Well, my daughter wanted them and then outgrew that phase, so I'm stuck with them. But I feel that song, it's just so tender, warm and beautiful.
That scares me a little. My son is not allowed to outgrow any of his needy creatures! Thank you so much for your kind words!
This is great. A lot of fun and it covers a lot of challenges too. I am indeed very fond of Axolotls they are incredibly cute. And having a lotl heart is fab. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for listening!
What a fun little song, very imaginative way to do a skirmish and multiple challenges at the same time!
Thank you. 😊 I keep a running list of challenges and prompts I would like to try, so I think they sneak into my psyche while I’m writing!
This is cute! I like the lyrical acrostic! My daughter loved it!