FAWM: "I Will"

I Will

2 days ago by @andrea

There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

I had an idea about a sparkly person and this evolved. Probably not what I initially intended, but that is how it goes.

I am unsure of the chorus repeating lines. A rough draft as it stands.

Lyrics

I am the thunder I am the boom All head turns When I’m in the room

I am a diamond I am a jewel Just one look and Everyone drools

I am the fire I am the flame I need your love To play/win the game

I will dazzle and I’ll glow Put on the perfect show, show, show I will glitter and I’ll gleam I’ll be everybody’s dream, dream, dream I will sparkle and I’ll shine Make you mine, mine, mine

I am the luster In the stone I am the queen Upon the throne

I am the magnet You can’t resist The blood red lips You need to kiss

I am the fire I am the flame You are the moth In this wicked game

I will dazzle and I’ll glow Put on the perfect show, show, show I will glitter and I’ll gleam I’ll be everybody’s dream, dream, dream I will sparkle and I’ll shine Make you mine, mine, mine

Don’t deny that you want you me As much as I want you I’m the rocket to the stars As far as the eye can see

I will dazzle and I’ll glow Put on the perfect show, show, show I will glitter and I’ll gleam I’ll be everybody’s dream, dream, dream I will sparkle and I’ll shine Make you mine, all mine

Comments

@eas3637 4h

Your rhymes are delightful and I love how the energy builds throughout the lyrics! There's something deceptively sweet about this song until you realize that it's actually quite menacing! "I am the magnet/You can’t resist/The blood red lips/You need to kiss." Fun!

@paulharrison 5h

Nice job on the lyrics, Andrea! I read them first and then saw your liner notes. In my head, I heard more of a slightly-sinister Leonard Cohen interpretation...maybe heavy on bass (or only on bass). I think good lyrics like these tend to "work" with different approaches. I look forward to hearing what your chosen "suitor" will do. Regardless, well done!

@greengrassgirl 1d

Nice job, Andrea….this is FUN! Can’t to hear how it comes out.

@sheslin 1d

Sparkly indeed! You have to go where the muse takes you - and this girl is really something. It makes me think of the song "A Little Bit Alexis" from Schitt's Creek in terms of attitude. What a confident, empowered and fun character you created. I would like to try these Andrea if they are still available. Totally out of my genre but that might be super fun!

@andrea 1d

I am so pleased that you like these lyrics. I have offered them to someone, but if they are not interested, I would be happy for you to take a shot at them.

@sheslin 1d

Oh I am sorry - I did not check to see if they were tagged open for collab - thanks for letting me know!

@jerrypettit 1d

A little narcissistic--like a few of my past girlfriends, when I was young and dumb--but this would sound great as a "girl pop power song" as @williamjames mentions. Great job! ❤️

@andrea 1d

Yeah, she is full of herself -lol. That was the part I didn't intend to write, but I'm ok with what it is. I think the music and vocals will need some attitude :)

@williamjames 1d

Well, this is certainly a girl pop power song if I ever saw one! You have wonderful and confident lines here and the I am me and I am fabulous energy comes through. This should be done in spice girls style!

@andrea 1d

Girl pop power - I love that! Thank you for your thoughtful and wonderful comments.

@ayeahmur 1d

Lots of cool details here that help hammer home the meaning very clearly. Particularly enjoyed "I am the luster in the stone", that's a beauty (literally!). I can see what you mean about the repetition in the chorus. I think I'd be tempted to only have repetition on the "mine" in the last line, but it'd depend on the music.

@andrea 1d

Thanks for your kind comments and also for your thoughts on the chorus. Perhaps the melody will find itself with music.