Undercover, undiscovered
by @gordon
Skirmish: Undercover Heart/ Underco... (@jem)
Liner Notes
A more upbeat take on the prompt this time, with occasional harmonies. Still liking that prompt!
Lyrics
Undercover, undiscovered, Looking to recover The heart still wants to rule the head So easily mislead
Hidden deep inside Afraid to show itself Afraid of rejection, Employ classic misdirection Undercover, undiscovered
Undercover heart Trying to stay secret What the words reveal So cleverly obscured Undercover, undiscovered
Undercover heart Longs to be set free Looking for some land Like a sailboat lost at sea Undercover, undiscovered
(c) words and music G Todd 2026
Comments
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OH this reminds med of summers and road trips with to many stops at the "wrong" place and lost of laughter. Thank you for the trip tdown memory lane <3
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"The heart still wants to rule the head So easily mislead"
You had me from this great couplet! So many great lines and couplets in this one.
"Hidden deep inside Afraid to show itself Afraid of rejection, Employ classic misdirection" 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
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What a fantastic result for an hours work! When those harmonies kick in?? Wow! Getting a real Difford & Tilbrook vibe here (high praise from me!).
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Great musicality for a quick skirmish! I like the simple phrases instead of full sentences ... lends itself to singing really well. Great overall feeling, too.
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Beautiful, insightful lyrics, beautiful music, singing and playing. Very cool and inspiring take on the prompt.
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Love the concept of both undercover and undiscovered. Great job!
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Finally getting to listen to this lovely take on the prompt. "Undercover, Undiscovered" sounds so good together and the meanings mesh so well too. That last verse has such beautiful imagery - longing for what you need. Also like the slightly talky style on some of your lines. works well.