black widow

by @sadcoolgirl

Liner Notes

another lil dark pop tune for ya. i wanted to play with the idea of kind of a gothic, vampiric piece. added a few lines to reflect the vibe.

we're nearing the end of dial tone!!.. hoping to release this week. wish me luck!

#dark #pop #flute

Lyrics

i’m caught in your spiderweb tangled up inside your bed will you spare me? you may even be a black widow, baby

and i like where it begins underneath my skin it rises to the surface my finger on your pulse keeps pulling you back in

i’m entranced locked in your dangerous dance you hold the key and now’s your chance to strike i’m mesmerized no more disguises smile and sink your teeth in

if you are a god i am your creation a fruit in the garden of temptation you’re a creature of the night and you have my invitation inside if you want it you can will it alive i am the manifestation of your mind

i’m entranced locked in your dangerous dance you hold the key and now’s your chance to strike i’m mesmerized no more disguises smile and sink your teeth in

Comments

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The vibes you create musically are just so amazing, and the vocals are so dreamy/trancelike. Lyrically solid as heck too I especially like "if you are a god i am your creation a fruit in the garden of temptation"

Are you releasing a physical copy of the album or just digital? Was just curious.

Great song again though! :D

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thank you so much! i just released the album! thank you for being a loyal listener throughout this journey, it's so appreciated. no physical copy yet, but love the idea of it.

you can support it here ♡: -bandcamp: https://sadcoolgirl.bandcamp.com/album/dial-tone -soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/sadcoolgirl2/sets/dial-tone

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i like the soft violin in the back ground, adds an extra darkness. if you don't know the track you should check out Lullaby by The Cure which I think may be the creepiest pop song ever released - some great lyrics here

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nice that you picked up on that cello! i was worried there were too many layers and things were getting lost. such a great song, thanks for sharing with us!

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Amazing, deliciously dark song. A true masterpiece. Great singing, playing and production. So many layers. Brilliant job!

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thank you!! much appreciated ♡ hope your fawm is going well

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I can't wait to hear this album! I'm sure it will be a big hit!

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ah thank you! i'm hoping by friday the latest?! maybe sooner... stay tuned!

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Very well done! I'm getting early Evanescence vibes from some parts of it. Really enjoyed it!

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ooh very cool, thank you!

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the start draws you in further. Does have that vampy ethereal feel! very nice vocal and excellently produced!

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awesome feedback, thank you for listening and stopping by!

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I kind of feel like this would fit perfect for the end credits of a Japanese horror film. The lyrical themes also chime in. Great job!

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wow thanks so much! that's kind of you :))

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Your production is soooooo good, this is so damn good, holy crap.

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thank you!!!!! i really appreciate the kind words. thanks for listening ♡

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This is very moody and insinuous. Your vocal winds beautifully against the backing track.

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thank you! it's fast phrasing and i was hoping to keep up enough to do justice. much appreciated :))

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I like the repetition of the minor scale in the background for the beat. I like how it is used for the 1st and 4th stanzas in parallel with the lyrics. Solid track.

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thank you!!

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That melody is winding and twisting and turning like a spider's web. The lyric and music marry well. Do you write lyrics first or music first? Cool stuff!

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ah thanks for the listen and comment! it totally depends, sometimes the lyrics come first sometimes the melody does. sometimes i just sit there and build a song for fun from drums/beat to top layers. i write constantly and sometimes if i sit down and want to make a song i'll visit my catalog based on my mood. i find lyric creation to be one of my favorite parts of music making!

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I like the way you change the pace of the delivery…Keeps it interesting. Favorite line: I am a manifestation of your mind. 😀

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thank you! the pacing was tough but i'm glad it worked out. thanks for listening!

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This one has a lovely eerie feel to it. The performance is great. I really enjoyed it.

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aw, thanks! glad to hear :))

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