Untitled (Help Me Pick a Title!)

by @brianb3

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Untitled (Help Me Pick a Title!)
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Liner Notes

The lyrical content of this song is pretty self-explanatory. It is hard not to be constantly thinking about politics and economics and the entire American clusterfuck, so naturally some of that came out through this song.

This song has been a work in progress this entire FAWM up to this point. It went through some transformation, with the Verse originally being conceived as a Chorus, and different lyrics originally intended for the Verses, but it grew into itself in a different direction. Earlier in the month, I was out grabbing dinner for myself and heard “It’s the End of the World As We Know It” by R.E.M. playing in the background, and I couldn’t help but reflect on how differently it hits nowadays compared to any other time in my life (I am 30). I think that that subconsciously influenced my choice for the chord progression in the Verse (I-V-ii-IV).

Additionally, I've been so focused on getting this song finished and making it sound as close to what I hear in my head as possible, in the crevices of free time in my 12-hour workdays, that I haven’t been able to decide on a good title. I am open to suggestions.

Some of the vocals were recorded in a car during my lunch break, and the guitars were recorded in three different sessions with different setups—and I didn't have the patience this time around to bother with an audio interface for most things, so all the vocals, the drums leading up to the Bridge, and the guitars leading up to Verse 3 were all recorded with the mic built into my 2021 MacBook Pro. I’m still a bit of a perfectionist about getting the mix beefy enough to sound presentable, but I have been allowing myself to be a bit more crude in my recording techniques to get things out the door a little quicker. Hopefully my next songs for FAWM won’t be as involved so I can have a fighting chance of getting one song out per week.

#punk #rock #punkrock #political #fascism #classwar #minneapolis

Lyrics

[Verse 1] I wanna drive the bus that the right is throwing themselves under After the lightning ICE strikes the ground, I wanna be the thunder Do you hear the cries of the world suffering your every blunder?

[Chorus 1] AI is coming for your jobs ICE & DHS are stealing moms Fascists in the streets and dropping bombs Undo the Constitution or you’re gone

[Verse 2] I am so fed up, with the way, that the world is going We will not let up, with the wave, of blue that’s showing How brazenly corrupt, and self-absorbed, politics keeps growing

[Chorus 2] The oligarchs are due for a fall Trump keeps telling lies stacked ten feet tall Time for guillotines, no time to stall Kill the ruling class before we’re mauled

[Bridge] contains audio from the Renee Good and Alex Pretti shooting videos, without the shootings themselves—to capture the mayhem stemming from such incidents, thanks to the Trump Gestapo.

[Verse 3] We have to unite, build a bridge, to ordinary people Let’s put up a fight, like schools of fish—as one we’re not so feeble Freedom is the light, in a system that oppresses people Every day and night, resist the king, the architect of evil

[Verse 4] We are on the cusp of collapse, I can fucking taste it We have lust for blood of the elites, and I can’t say I hate it We will not let up, corporate greed and power must be vanquished

[Chorus 3] Don’t ignore the eyes you use to see Plenty’s wrong but it’s not you or me The clowns in office want to kill your speech Your rights to guns and protest are under siege

Comments

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I am so with you on this. What a production! Love that it devolves into the midst of protest. I can tell you put a lot into this and captured the sentiment of our time with a rolicking stomp!

As for a title, Untitled evokes the speechlessness upon seeing jaw dropping violence and corruption with no accountability, but I Wanna Drive the Bus is a good first line title option.

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Thank you! Funny enough, that’s the part of the lyrics that I stole from a YouTube comment that I saw somewhere. I guess it would be appropriate to use it as the title! Thanks for the help, titles are really hard sometimes. Cheers!

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