Lovers are Dead
by @jessicalh
NSFW Skirmish: An Anti-Valentines Song (@ajna1960)Liner Notes
Disclaimer: this song is not a reflection of how I genuinely feel about love, but it was a lot of fun to write. Great prompt!
Lyrics
Violets are blue Roses are red Hate wins again Lovers are dead
Can't get your fucking face Out of my head Roses are blue Violets are red
Don't send me flowers No breakfast in bed What's in the box Hope it's your head
Comments
Pointed, pithy, and perfect for an anti valentine song! Your dagger is sharp and spot-on with a sinister sounding vocal delivery.
Awesome to hear this goth death metal dark power 5ths type background....could imagine some distortion effects. It's like Halloween made an appearance.
This was so much fun to listen to while I mopped the floor. It made me think of a song I listened to in college. I think it was by the Velvet Underground, about someone who mailed himself to a lover or potential lover or ex or something. He was stabbed to death when she opened the box with a knife. This seems like it could be an answer song to that one.
undead undead
What a great way to end!
hared core. love the vocals and the driving beat of the piano
Short and, uhm, not exactly sweet. I can totally imagine this song in a gothic rock arrangement! Argh, I'd love to hear that right now.
Great piano sound. Fab vocal delivery. Good color switch in the middle. "What's in the box / Hope it's your head" -- THAT'S how you end a song.