Mary Lou

by @micahklages

Liner Notes

#piano Finally my instrument, but now I have morning-voice. Oh well. I wrote this in about three minutes at 10:30 on Friday night. Lyrical depth is not fantastic.

Lyrics

Mary Lou I think I could be in love with you And I hope that you could love me too Mary Lou

Mary Lou Maybe one day I can be with you We can do the things you want to do Mary Lou

Mary Lou Tell me that you love me too Tell me that you love me too Mary Lou

Comments

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I do like the way the piano skips and trips. So much fun. Agree that the hold at the end is masterful.

Lyrical depth will come with [more than three minutes of] time. Yesterday spent its formative days as 'Scrambled eggs, I love your legs' but the skill in the composition would have been just as undeniable.

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Sweet peppy. song! I like the slightly off kilter rhythm. The hold at the end is a nice touch. Enjoyed this!

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Definitely getting some St. Pepper vibes here. Simple but effective piano and your voice sounds great here.

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Well Hello Mary Lou. (Sorry Wrong song). Love the Beatley chord changes. Short and sweet like Paul used to write.

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(It's his dad's fault for turning off the recording computer and going to bed early on Friday night)

Fun bounce to the song; feels a little like ELO or the Beatles.

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