Light Of The Dawn

by @lbrewington

Liner Notes

linear

the light of the dawn is as beautiful as it is sad

details

written: 2/14/2o26

notes

the first of the chorus needs a little bit of work but it's mostly there.

https://soundcloud.com/lbrewington/light-of-the-dawn

#acousticonetake #fawm #singersongwriter

Lyrics

[c3] am g d em she wants to sell smoothies on the beach in mexico she took me someplace she said was dangerous and now my friends hate the mention of my name dm em am but to me it all the feels the same

c g a they told me i would find relief they told me i would be set free it has done nothing but put a worry in my soul d c am coming home to the light of the dawn

am g d em she said she speaks spanish but i don't think it's true something about the way that light hits her makes me feel blue sitting on the stairs in that pale moon light d em am i could talk to her all night

dm em truth is i thought we could prosper a deck of cards built on lies but in the morning when those vibes fade away g d am you'll be left old and gray

Comments

[pic]

Really like the verse melody on this, and your gentle, mournful performance, too. Esp. love the verse that begins "she said she speaks..." and most esp. "the way that light hits her makes me feel blue."

[pic]

Oh man, there's a whole novel buried in this. In fact I bet there's a great story lurking just in the line "and now my friends hate the mention of my name". Great writing, and a delivery that effortlessly grabs the attention.

[FAWM]