That Tone in Her Mouth
Challenge: SAWTOOTH MELODY
Liner Notes
I whistled a “sawtooth melody” into Suno as a prompt while my wife spoke with my oldest daughter on the phone next to me on the couch. Then I scrambled the words she spoke into lyrics using Suno’s lyric generator…
I prompted for “mellow” and got this…
Lyrics
[Verse 1] Right Yeah Exactly Oh boy Well I had been feeling Pretty good about things About that whole way we were talking Like maybe I could trust my own voice again I’d already stacked up Little wins in my head Walking lighter through my day Feeling taller in my skin And then she just said “oh my god” And it cracked Right down the middle of my calm
[Chorus] (Oh my god) why Why now Why that tone in her mouth Like a match on the edge of my doubt Right Yeah Exactly I thought I was past this part
(Instrumental)
[Chorus] (Oh my god) why Why now Why that tone in her mouth Like a match on the edge of my doubt Right Yeah Exactly I thought I was past this part
[Verse outro] Right Yeah Exactly Oh boy Well I had been feeling Pretty good about things About that whole way we were talking Like maybe I could trust my own voice again I’d already stacked up Little wins in my head Walking lighter through my day Feeling taller in my skin And then she just said “oh my god” And it cracked Right down the middle of my calm
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Yes… I absolutely love that you noticed that Bob. I love reframing the mundane and saying, “Look at this differently!” My favorite artists in all genres do that!
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Way outside my songwriting process, but facinating none the less. It worked. I admire your creativity in taking the everyday, even mundane, and with the help of your tools, sculpting it into something vibrant and really interesting.