I totally agree about the James-Bond-chase-scene-on-a-surfboard menace feel! I think I counted 13 words, which is very impressive to get your point across so efficiently and effectively. I once challenged myself to write a song with only 12 words. It’s called “12 Words” lol.

There's a James-Bond-chase-scene-on-a-surfboard menace to this that I really dig. With such spare lyrics (though they are effective, so that's not a complaint), it helps to have the strong musical underpinnings you've created here.

Love the arrangement, the sort of offbeat grooviness of it, especially when the muted guitar comes in and plays against the shuffling drumbeat in a really nice way. The reverb-heavy guitar chords sets a powerful mood, again I get a Morricone vibe, in a great way. And that kind of rattling sound that comes in around 1.14 is intriguing. I like these kinds of songs, heavy on atmosphere with just a few repeated lyric lines that are very distinct but also wide open to interpretation.