Nemesis 2

by @gordon

Skirmish: Nemesis (@robinleaf)
Nemesis 2
gordon
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Liner Notes

#heavy #sweet #nasty Another go, and just within the hour!

Lyrics

Retribution and vengeance Forget your independence We are going to make you pay Take all your comforts away

Righteousness is on our side Nowhere for you to hide You must pay for all your sins This is a game where no one wins

So prepare to meet your fate The night is dark the hour is late You’ll hang in chains before the dawn Your entrails soaked into the lawn

Meet your nemesis Meet your end And for emphasis Your family members will attend

(c) words and music G Todd 2026

Comments

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@cjk

Very intense and dark. Great second skirmish.

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Tonal prosody on point. really well done. Nice skirmish

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Dang it, you beat me to working in that famous saying about entrails soaking into the lawn into a song! 😂 I love the intensity, this seems like poetry that's been worked on a hell of a lot lomger than an hour. Amazing job

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The crunch is an effective backdrop to the lyrics. Nice vocals. It's dark and it works. Nice job.

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