FAWM: "I Can Feel Your Eyes on Me"

I Can Feel Your Eyes on Me

7 hours ago by @hmstreetteam

Skirmish: I CAN FEEL (@corinnecurcio) Challenge: SAWTOOTH MELODY

I Can Feel Your Eyes on Me

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Liner Notes

#acousticrock #psychedelic #skirmish This was fun, and rougher than my usual, especially in the melody. I tried to pick up the psychedelic feel of “I Am the Walrus” along with its prominent opening melodic shape. This song breaks from the usual ideas of what the parts of a song are.

Lyrics

I can feel your eyes on me When I go room to room What can it mean What do you see When you’re looking at me What do you do To me

I can feel your eyes on me When I am fast asleep What can it mean What happens when I Activate my third eye I have to try

I am only a starseed A curious starseed I’ve never been to Earth before I am the one who should learn more

What is my star genesis Could it be Sirius

I can feel your eyes on me The camera’s always on What can it mean We’re humans who Live in the same zoo Abd don’t know what to do

I am only a starseed A curious starseed I’ve never been to Earth before I am the one who should learn more

What is my star genesis Could it be Sirius

Comments

@marilisa 6h

I love where you started and where you've gone with this! Great take on the prompt! Love the pace of the song.

@sheslin 6h

What a very cool take on the prompt and such an interesting perspective! Makes me think of the show Resident Alien. I enjoyed your song a lot and the melody is so memorable. Well done - great skirmish!

@sonicdeatheagle 7h

Take this to outer space, starseed! I can definitely hear this as big as you want. Fun jam!

@vince_link 7h

I really like this. For me "Walrus" is the most inspiring Beatles track, so it is a nice place to start. The lyrics are from an extraordinary point of view. Nice. Could it be Sirius? Is that pun "Could it be serious?" intended? - (Or was it not meant to be a pun at all?)