Running Out of Patience

by @paul_pedersen

Skirmish: Running Out of... (@tarahenton)
Running Out of Patience
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Liner Notes

This is the result of a #skirmish hosted by @tarahenton based on the beginning phrase, "Running out of..." The song that you hear was written and recorded in the hour, but needs a third verse or a bridge or both to finish it off. (Since the session ended at lunch time in my time zone, I took care of my tummy before posting. The way to a man's heart, you know.)

And, true confessions, the sentiment expressed may reflect my wife's view rather than mine. Just sayin'.

#runningoutof #wewritesongs

Lyrics

I’m running out of patience, I’m on a short fuse I’m running out of patience with you I’m running out of patience, and you don’t even try I’m running out of patience with you

All the little things you do add up to something big I want things to run smoothly but you don’t give a fig The corn broom’s in the closet, it never sees the day You don’t see the needs of life, you only want to play

I’m running out of patience, I’m on a short fuse I’m running out of patience with you I’m running out of patience, and you don’t even try I’m running out of patience with you

The obvious is lost on you, I really don’t know why All the things left undone make me want to cry Look at life around you, you can make it right If you just lend a helping hand before we say good night

I’m running out of patience, I’m on a short fuse I’m running out of patience with you I’m running out of patience, and you don’t even try I’m running out of patience with you

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It definitely sums up the frustration one can have with another. Very nice rhymes and rhythm. I like starting and ending with the chorus. Good work!

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Thanks for another visit, Cindy. Next time you come, I'll have tea and cookies for you.

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some great rhyming choices here Paul! and i love the playful vibe in both the lyrics and arrangement. Its not always easy to write a song from someone elses point of view, but it seems you know your wife very well!

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Thanks for listening, Celine. I know your time is limited with work, so having you stop by is an honour. Despite my attempt at humour in the liner notes, Anne and I have a pretty smooth relationship. Forty-seven years of marriage and still waiting for our first fight.

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This put a smile on my face. The way to my heart is food and a light-hearted approach to a very relatable situation!

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Sorry that I couldn't bring snacks but I do appreciate the visit and your positive comment.

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ha, great fun! maybe to complete that kind of more endearing self-depreciation, if you ever performed it, you could sing it as 'you're running out of patience with me'.. fun song, nicely done! (always interesting to see what directions people went it, i went in a different one of course)

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Glad you enjoyed it Mike. Thanks for saying so. I'll have to watch to see what you post on the topic.

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