Insecuri-tease
by @jdschramm
Challenge: MADE-UP WORDSLiner Notes
A made up word that is a homophone of another real word :) Went back to playing with some drum loops, but played all the other instruments. Writing came together quick - demos always take me longer cause I get too invested.
Lyrics
Intro E C A C
V1 - E C A C I could be the one We could make it two You say you need love But you don’t follow through
CH - E C A C E C A Insecuri-tease You can’t make Up your mind No oh oh oh Begging on your knees Then you just step aside Oh oh oh oh
V2 - E C A C Heart is On your sleeve Then you Tear it off You made Me believe Now I just can’t stop
CH X2 - E C A C E C A Insecuri-tease You can’t make Up your mind No oh oh oh Begging on your knees Then you just step aside Oh oh oh oh
Bridge - G B Tell me where I stand I’m sinking
Solo/Intro E C A C
CH - E C A C E C A Insecuri-tease You can’t make Up your mind No oh oh oh Begging on your knees Then you just step aside Oh oh oh oh
Bridge - G B Tell me where I stand I’m sinking
Comments
this is fantastic! great song, great production, great performance. Love those short and to the point lines, with lots of space in the arrangement to hear everything- its so deeply funky and groovy and memorable while engaging the mind as well. This sounds more like a finished thing then a demo to me!
The intro instantly grabbed me - fun and singable. The contrast of the carefree nature of that figure with the subject matter is a an interesting choice. Its disarming and then you get hit with this conflict. I've a soft spot for that progression ( III - VI - i - VI ). It always sounds so cinematic. Using the A maj is a tasty substitution. I love the overall feel and production. This is cool.
Great infectious groove, great sound design. That right-channel business in the bridge is really tasty - and when things start getting gritty & crackling it's an appropriately-distressed sound in keeping with the theme.
Your made up word has the value of making sense as if it should've been a word for a long time, and gives a familiar "oh yeah, I remember that person" vibe that makes it so relatable.
Smmmooooootttthhhhhh, but with Nirvana vibes ❤️🙏