A Place to Live
Liner Notes
#fuc I'm not sure this works - it puts 2 points of view into the same song. Maybe i'll rewrite it sometime and do less fence sitting
Lyrics
I remember this place back when I was a child The meadows and fields- Mother Nature run wild But now it’s all houses and cars roads and shops No one remembers the fields full of crops
But is it the builders who shoulder the blame For building those houses that all look the same Or is it ourselves that we need to forgive For wanting a warm clean and safe place to live
Chorus O give me a space Give me a place I need a safe place to rest Don’t let me roam far from my home I’m hoping I pass the test
And if it all seems that it’s never quite right To turn nature’s beauty to a building site We need to live somewhere and that’s how it seems We’re wanting to live in the house of our dreams
It’s never been easy we’re finding it hard We’re wanting to say it “ Not in My Back Yard” But there is a need and it needs to be filled There still remain lots of houses to build
If we welcome outsiders the strangers the lost We can do it of course but there will be a cost To discard the familiar embracing the new Who cares if the outcome is spoiling the view?
Comments
I was just thinking to myself, "I haven't seen @strumandstress yet this year," and suddenly here you are! Hooray! Well I love this just as I love all your songs, and I agree with the other comment that this doesn't come across as two distinct viewpoints so much as one person considering both angles, so I don't think you need to worry too much about refining it. Good to hear you again!
I feel, the 2 points of view you mention, are, for many, both within one mind - so this seems more, to me, one turning things over in one's head, trying to understand/reach a consensus, rather than 2 different people. At least, I know, I feel myself bend in both directions at different times. Nicely done - made me think (for which, as it is 7AM here, perhaps, I should be angry with you 😆 )
The dialectic form has been in use for thousands of years and there's no reason whatsoever why it wouldn't belong in a song about suburban sprawl. I think it works great here, most particularly in the verses.