Keep Them Safe
by @savvyaz · @nancyrostMod · @deadhead · @mishykatz · @br0th3rh00d
Liner Notes
This was fun! We had a great group. Also, this my first official time ever being stitcher/producer, so I’m celebrating the small victories in my songwriting journey! Thank you to @beacon for coordinating this cool challenge. ❤️
https://fawm.org/forums/3503#c95145
Song 9: Lyricist: @br0th3rh00d Melody: @nancyrost First Harmony: @savvyaz Second Harmony: @mishykatz Third Harmony: @deadhead Producer: @savvyaz
Lyrics
Golden sun Amazing rays Warming fun Oh my days!
Beaches soft Golden sand Gritty sock Hold my hand
Holy gaze Summer ripe Love always Family time
Child at play In the surf Roll in wave Keep them safe
Comments
Yes!
So true
This is really wonderful’ love the concise lyrics that capture summer so well and the great layers of harmonies over the melody!!! Great work! Bravo!
Thank you 💕
Thanks!! 😊
@deadhead I love your low harms!
Thanks. The middle part (Holy gaze etc...) was especially fun to sing under what you and the sang before me!
Nice job Song 9 Team! I can tell a bunch of you were trying new things, which is what this is all about. I particularly like the "Holy gaze, summer ripe" lines. Really cool what you did there!
Thank you!!!
Thanks so much!
Thankyou! I thought they were quite poetic lines but I was also worrying them a bit: I was trying to convey the blissful and wholesome headiness of watching and engaging your kids playing on the beach, making sandcastles, running to the sea, walking down the stream, maybe watching them go to the rockpools or off to the cafe or the water with their dad, or packing up when it's still fun on a really pleasantly warm afternoon on a busy beach. I'm glad that people ran with it! That that moment-ness came out!
First time doing the melody on this one - what a cool experience! Sometimes the harmonies were what I expected, sometimes they were different and more interesting than what I'd imagined! Love all the textures of the voices on this sweet, concise lyric!
It’s always a joy to see what comes! Thank you for the melody to start us off.
Love it! Great job everyone!
This was fun! Good singing all
Ah, cool to collab. Anyone want more, longer or shorter hit me up! Thanks for including me!
So playful! I love the "echo" in the verses.
There's always an element of fear when you're an adult. Aware of what might go wrong. This is such a lovely way to remind us that children shoud feel free while we keep watch.