FAWM: "Translucent?"

Translucent?

1 week ago by @kc_

There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

Just saw this… Great prompt… Did voice recognition on my phone and my big fat little sausage fingers had a very difficult time editing LMAO!

Kind of a stream of consciousness

Lyrics

Translucent

You told me what you meant no missing, translucent

Clear text that you sent Your four words translucent

Your clarity was hell bent crushed the best in me translucent

A pane of pain that you lent Saw through you, translucent

No slicing or dicing, mincing or tears No fog or obscura bomb unawares

Is there a feeling I think a glow in the heart Or is it a laser site on another clear dart

To call you a dick or call you a prick perhaps a magician who knows every trick

Your mental jujutsu brought back my tic

And you grin at your wins, think you are so slick

I’ve colored my world you’re black and white doesn’t pass

Thought you were purebred, but you’re just a jackass

That’s what I meant… translucent

Comments

@andrea 2d

This is a slick write. It reads in my heads at a quick pace with a strong attitude. I think the feeling shines through perfectly. I hope it finds music to match!

@narwhalsexist 1w

A PANE OF PAIN THAT YOU LENT! Fricken POETRY! The whole thing but that lineeeeeee, I IMMEDIATELY had to say it out loud

@barbara 1w

ahh, these words that come when you've had enough.. biting back with a crystallized will.. so many choice phrases that illustrate, i particularly loved "your clarity was hell bent" - it captures the heartlessness so well