Translucent at Best
NSFW Skirmish: Translucent (@robinleaf)Liner Notes
Calling someone “translucent” to me is when someone isn’t actually lying to you, but they only tell you half-truths. You ever know someone like that?
I think I’m only going to do improv this FAWM, it’s good practice :D
Lyrics
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Patently false And pleasantly lying Could you just tell me that You’ve been trying ‘Cause it feels like I’ve been doing the brunt of the work here
Communication has never been your situation You turn the station to other things Is it lying if distraction works, patently?
‘Cause I don’t remember the last time you told me what you were thinking, yeah I can’t remember the last time you were transparent You’re translucent at best Would you stop putting me through so many tests? Just tell me what you’re thinking, you don’t have to lie to me
‘Cause you’re pleasantly— Your pleasant falsehoods might seem like they’re more kind than the truth But eventually the shit you’re piling will start to fall loose ‘Cause you keep it up, you can’t keep it in Even if you convince yourself that it’s true I know that you are just hiding who you really are
Could you tell me how you feel inside? There’s no reason to hide I know it’s so hard to, to be transparent But the way that you’re hiding everything Makes me wonder if you even know what’s reality
Could you tell me how you really feel Could you tell me what you’re really thinking Could you tell me how you really feel Could you be transparent, be translucent?
Could you tell me how you really feel Could you tell me what you’re really thinking Could you live in reality Instead of all this pleasant fiction?
Comments
Lovely voice and performance! Your interpretation of translucent is powerful, heartfelt. Love this song!
I like your singing voice a lot, with a nice little vibrato. If this is a straight improv, then wow that's amazing. Great skirmish!
Ooo!!! You’ve got a great style, I love what you did here.
I felt like you struck gold on the idea of interpersonal translucence— it feels like it’s much easier to hide in someone’s ideals and expectations, even if you’re projecting them, and then you said “Could you live in reality, instead of all this pleasant fiction” and it sold the idea to me immediately. Some walls have no windows, and all you’re asking for is a peep in. Great work!
Oh my gosh, I don't know how you do this. Are you also improvising all of the lyrics all in one go? Damn. Well it sounds fabulous. I love everything you do. I think I'm going to have to use this progression for something. Haven't done it in a while. Love it.
ALL IN ONE GO!!!! I’ve been practicing coming up with improv lyrics at a local blues jam, it’s so fun 🥰
Feel free, I was very happy to find this progression 🥰
WOW! The only time I improv lyrics is when I'm driving my cat to and from the vet (I sing a random tune and just sing whatever words because it stops him from crying all the way there). I've never seriously tried to do it, just silly stuff. Man, it's so impressive that you do that!
Nice vocal journey. Vulnerable piece which you have written and delivered admirably. Nice take on the skirmish. Cheers
Nice feel. I like your improvisation. Nicely done.
Ace! Real Tori Amos vibes there.
That’s sweet jazziness. Love the internal rhymes.
This is beautiful, and inspiring! "You’re translucent at best" is a fabulous line, and "translucent" as part-truths is a great interpretation.