Get Me Back

by @alyak72

Skirmish: Download it... (@lemonbrew)
Get Me Back
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Liner Notes

Cool premise. Wish I had an extra ~30 minutes or so, but enjoyed the skirmish a lot. Cool backing track @lemonbrew

Note: Done for the "Download it..." skirmish. Lemonbrew provided all of the non-vocal elements of this track.

Lyrics

Gotta get me back (x4)

You always knew how to love me How to treat me How to fix me

You always knew where to take me What to show me Who to greet me

And I believed in you Why did you believe in me too?

Looking for answers You're already given Hoping for more I've already exceeded Please take me back To when I was more driven The echos of then Might be just be what is needed now

You have such a scene Not what you seem Been such a dream

You're quite a city Strangely pretty Sweet and gritty

And I believed in you Why did you believe in me too?

The echos of then might just what is needed now Gotta get me back

Looking for answers You're already given Hoping for more I've already exceeded Please take me back To when I was more driven The echos of then Might be just be what is needed now

Gotta get me back

Comments

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Oooh I like this vibe! Sounds great! Really nice lyrics and vocals! Great job for a skirmish!

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The rhythmic flow of your lyrics works great with the track. And, as always, it's wonderful to hear your voice again.

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Starke Idee, gefällt mir sehr gut! Ich hätte nie gedacht das man in der kurzen Zeit sowas draus machen kann. Nochmal Entschuldigung das es mit dem Download nicht sofort funktioniert hat.

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Vielen Dank. Es hat mir viel Spaß gemacht. Ich habe vor einigen Jahren etwa einen Monat in Berlin verbracht. Ich dachte, eine Frage auf Deutsch verdient auch ein deutsches Thema.

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Dankeschön auch an dich! Wenn du mir deine Stimme ohne Effekte schicken könntest, würde ich es neu mischen. Oder für leicht willst du es ja nochmal neu singen... Grüße aus Oberhausen

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Thanks for posting the lyrics The line "Why did you believe in me too?" is particularly poignant. The obvious "Why didn't you..." gets inverted and becomes intriguing.

The only change I'd suggest, if I were your editor, would be "HOW to greet me?" "Who" here sounds forced and unnatural English. If you really want to keep the idea of controlling the invites, try "Who got to meet me" it might just scan there.

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Oh totally, HOW sounds way better. Thanks for the feedback!

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I missed the whole point of the exercise and simply went for the Title of the skirmish as a prompt.

You have responded really well to this challenge. Your lyrics certainly fit the mood of the piece.

Any chance you can post the lyrics here?

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Lyrics up!

[FAWM]