Don't Wanna Fight Anymore
by @jdschramm
Liner Notes
#firstfruits #80s #indie #synth
Started this on Sunday night, but ran into some computer and set-up issues so it took me a couple days to finish. Probably the dancy-est thing I have ever written. Leaned into an 80s vibe.
Wrote as 4 melodies over the same chords and then played with which one should be which part and then overlapped most of them at the end. It was a fun experiment. Glad to get this first one out, 13 to go.
Lyrics
Part A - 1 I thought you were Something special But you’re just some thing And nothing seems to Pierce your metal Like there’s no feeling
Part A - 2 Were you pretending Just to hurt me I don’t think you know Anything ‘bout how it should be Just acting
Part B You say I’m wrong But we were never right together I say I’m gone And never looking back
Part C Cause I don’t want to fight with you anymore You don’t wanna try being something more And I don’t wanna cry ‘bout you Anymore-or-or-ore Anymore-or-or-ore Whoa oh oh oh
Part D Time to just walk away We don’t have to fight anymore
Comments
Oooohhh! Everyone else said it, I'll say it too. This is where it's at!
Ooh, love these lines: "I thought you were / Something special / But you’re just some thing". Agree with the others: great sound, cool vocals, clean production. Neat!
Vibe nailed. I couldn't stay in my seat listening to it. 'Nuff said.
Definitely got the 80s bass and synths running through it. Very catchy melody lines. Superb stuff
Cool tune. Nailed the 80s sound. I could sing along in the car to this.
So comfortably and unashamedly 80s. This could be on a best hits of the 80s. I love it very much and love your singing too <3
This has a GREAT sound... not just an '80s "sense," but absolutely authentic. I'd have believed it was a hit from the actual era. Great vocal, too.
I love your voice and I’m very grateful for the reciprocate button cuz it brought me to this banger!!! What a bop!! The bass drives the song perfectly, and I’m a big fan of your vocal timbre!