You have the key to this exercise down pat. You have to sing it like you know exactly what you are talking about. This also sounds like a lesser known Semitic language and that lends it authenticity. 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

I'm believing every word of your lyrics.. you've totally committed. I really enjoy the cool picking vibe and growly vocals pair perfectly. Well done!

Love me some good made up words! You commitment makes this work seamlessly! Serious with a funny bone lurking around the corner.

Great idea! Do you know the band Sigur ros? They do a lot of stuff with gibberish language. Also of course the song "prisencolinensinainciusol" which was meant to be how English sounds to a non english speaker and has a surprisingly interesting music video, and surprisingly cool vibe. Keep it up love the low voice.

nice! very sweet vibe and groove. Almost reminds me of ancient spiritual chant of some kind. I would love to hear it a bit longer or repeated with a dynamic push! Great job! Nice percussive picking style!