Better Suggestions?
by @danxduran
Liner Notes
This one started life as a little melody/chords idea I recorded on my phone in December 2024. Not sure why it didn't surface in last year's FAWM - I guess it was pretty far down the spreadsheet!
With a new lyric idea, it got promoted... and here it is, song #2 for me this FAWM. Yes, I did have one Andrew in mind when I started, but I realise now there's another hard-partying Andrew this lyric could refer to!
Very rough recording - bass is programmed because that's generally how I compose these days, and I haven't bothered to rerecord it. Guitar was done after a few drinks last night, and the acoustic was so out of tune (about half a step sharp!) that I literally had to Melodyne it back into place. It's what the Beatles would have done if they could, right? Right?
Anyway, very rough recording. I did the vocal in about 20 minutes after a Costco run and before a school pickup run. Basic as. Wasn't sure it'd even work, but I think it does (or will, once recorded properly).
I also note I forgot to record the first chorus properly, so the lyrics here are slightly different to what's sung. I gotta get lazier and stop writing new words for each chorus.
#punk #poppunk #indie #grunge #protest #powerpop #weezer
Gear used: Danelectro '59 guitar through Orange Crush amp Takamine acoustic guitar Kontakt Prime bass Kontakt Beau Burchell drums Solina Strings Harmony vocal replacement - SoundID VoiceAI (ethically trained software, paid-for and artists compensated, run locally - and absolutely not generative AI - it's my own performance, replaced with a single voice in a three-part harmony. If you have a problem with that, that's your problem, not mine! Repeat: it is not generative AI. So don't @ me about it. Take it to the forums!). Shure Beta 58a, Rode NT1A mics
And plenty of processing plugins!
Feel free to download. For my proper, finished stuff: koshrecords.net
Lyrics
G Gm C G Gm it's gonna be real soon G Gm C G Gm we'll party hard like andrew through his doom G Gm C G G7 Gm7 G i'm sick of his face, as you must be G Gm C D D7 in death, a fascist's fate is complete F#m F# G Gm i'd try to make a better suggestion, but chances are that it's worse C Bm Bm7 B7 why won't you just die? F#m F# G Gm and skip to the bit of the movie where everyone decent is happy? C Bm7 Bsus2 why won't you just die? Dmaj7 G Gm C G Gm it's gonna be real soon G Gm C G Gm with a whimper, not like hitler, heart go boom G Gm C G G7 Gm7 G the world is better off without the likes of him G Gm C D D7 in death, a fascist's fate is locked in F#m F# G Gm i'd try to make a better suggestion, but chances are that it's worse C Bm Bm7 B7 why won't you just die? F#m F# G Gm and skip past the bit of the movie where everyone is prematurely happy? C Bm7 Bsus2 why won't you just die? Dmaj7
Comments
I really like the dynamics in this arrangement.
Tasty doubled vocals. Initial wall of guitar making me nod my head along! I like how you’ve contrasted the sections by breaking out to solo acoustic, gives the listener time to reflect on what they’ve heard. Chord progression is quite interesting to my ear musically
Nice rocking tune, I almost get early Weezer vibes in some of this.
Thanks! I've got another idea coming up which is even more early Weezer vibed, if that was possible...
I do love a tune that settles you in gently before smacking you round the chops. And for extra "ooo, that caught me off guard" points, there are some gorgeous 70s prog melodies in there!
Great production choices. That is how it’s done a perfect example of the pixies “loud quiet loud” playbook lots of cool changes and ear candy. Nice one!
Thanks! I was surprised how good the guitars came out since they were definitely just a quick rush recording lol
i love all the modal modulation, and killer mix!! i'm really feeling the lyrics rn
I love it when you do these tracks with a touch of the Beatles. Guitars do sound huge. I love the little acoustic breakdown. Vocals are on point especially for a quick 20 minute job. Lovely chord choices
another kick ass track. very relatable lyrics. this has a little bit of blur vibe and a little bit of the rentals. very 90s sounding. i listened to this three times. nice work
This is such a pleasingly expansive wall of sound, I like how slow it is, almost march or procession-like, and the contrasting brightness of “why won’t you just die” is a delight! Awesome to hear your stuff!
Thanks! It's literally just a panned electric guitar with acoustic and bass up the middle, haha. But it works somehow! I love the idea of it being a 'march' - good idea for expanding the arrangement in future.
Love it! Weirdly getting ELO vibes,, which is probably just me j$