Brand New

by @scootmo

Skirmish: Anadiplosis - start where... (@dudachris)
Brand New
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Liner Notes

This was a fun skirmish, it was interesting to write a song that circled around to where it began. Thanks for listening!

Lyrics

Brand New Oh I've got so much to prove Pushing until we break through Finding the land of our dreams

Dreams used to hold me until I would break Dreaming for its own sake Learning it's not so deep

Deep, until I drift off to sleep The hill of my dream is so steep We didn't know how to climb

Climb, reaching until I find you Now we know what to do To make it feel brand new again

Brand new Now we know what to do...

Comments

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I like the cycle of this, one other person did this in the challenge and its a delightful and clever use of the form. Great write!

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Nice guitar playing. I like the flow of your lyric and melody.

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The amount of space you gave between repeated words is perfect, plenty of room to breathe and finish a thought, but near enough that it still feels connected.

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@apolez

Nice job; now we know what to do!!

[FAWM]