Until You

by @kwillsen · @debs · @erbaer · @dugganensis · @hornesgiftshop

Until You
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Lyrics

[Verse 1] My soul was complete, Had no hole, had no need For another. My heart was my own Not a part, what a blow To discover:

[Pre-chorus] When you invaded my world, A new dimension unfurled.

[Chorus] And you fill a space I didn't know was there, And what once was void is now as full as air, And I never wanted to be part of a pair Until you. And now I'm less without you.

[Verse 2] My life was content, Had no strife, no intent On partnering Then you came around And I suddenly found, The strangest thing:

[Pre-chorus] That with you here at my side, A whole new world opened wide.

[Chorus] And you fill a space I didn't know was there, And what once was void is now as full as air, And I never wanted to be part of a pair Until you. And now I'm lost without you.

[Final Chorus] And you fill a space I didn't know was there, And what once was void is now as full as air, And I never wanted to be part of a pair Until you.

Comments

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I love this take on a love song. The harmonies are fantastic. The flow and upbeat rhythm are fun and perfecting fitting for the lyrics. This is super!

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I like the swing to the staggered timing. It's happy and jaunty, and the harmonies feel nice and full.

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Wow, great job here. Overall, it's really tight, and I like the slightly off timing on some of the verses, just to give it a little variation. Cool lyrics and some great singing! This is the type of thing that I hope comes out of this challenge!

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These are well crafted lyrics. I especially like what once was void is as full as air. I'm a sucker for a surprised by love theme... probably because it was a surprise for for me.

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Thanks, Matthew. The demo is up now. I find it interesting that the tempo chosen by @erbaer is really close to what I had in mind when writing the lyrics. Even the melody is similar, in places.

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