Until You
by @kwillsen · @debs · @erbaer · @dugganensis · @hornesgiftshop
Liner Notes
Lyrics
[Verse 1] My soul was complete, Had no hole, had no need For another. My heart was my own Not a part, what a blow To discover:
[Pre-chorus] When you invaded my world, A new dimension unfurled.
[Chorus] And you fill a space I didn't know was there, And what once was void is now as full as air, And I never wanted to be part of a pair Until you. And now I'm less without you.
[Verse 2] My life was content, Had no strife, no intent On partnering Then you came around And I suddenly found, The strangest thing:
[Pre-chorus] That with you here at my side, A whole new world opened wide.
[Chorus] And you fill a space I didn't know was there, And what once was void is now as full as air, And I never wanted to be part of a pair Until you. And now I'm lost without you.
[Final Chorus] And you fill a space I didn't know was there, And what once was void is now as full as air, And I never wanted to be part of a pair Until you.
Comments
I like the swing to the staggered timing. It's happy and jaunty, and the harmonies feel nice and full.
Wow, great job here. Overall, it's really tight, and I like the slightly off timing on some of the verses, just to give it a little variation. Cool lyrics and some great singing! This is the type of thing that I hope comes out of this challenge!
These are well crafted lyrics. I especially like what once was void is as full as air. I'm a sucker for a surprised by love theme... probably because it was a surprise for for me.
I love this take on a love song. The harmonies are fantastic. The flow and upbeat rhythm are fun and perfecting fitting for the lyrics. This is super!