Move Closer
Skirmish: posture -or- pose (@melodic)Liner Notes
#lyricsonly An experiment on my part, trying to write a one-sided conversation along the lines of some of the role-playing audio programs I’ve heard. This whole story line (but not the character) is borrowed from the StellarAudio ASMR channel on YouTube. It’s a very different style and experience from the songs that I usually write.
Lyrics
I know it’s late Is it okay if I come in I had a nightmare I don’t know where to begin I’m so sorry to bother you This late at night But if I’m alone right now The shadows might bite
What brought on the nightmare I really don’t know I gave up macadamia oil Six years ago Most of my nightmares back then Came out of that jar Isn’t the human body So very bizarre
Without you to hold me I don’t know what I would do If you want to move closer I might like that too
Oh yes my breathing It’s so shallow and rapid And my shoulders are tense I don’t know how that happened I don’t think I should tell you Much of the dream In just a few words I’d be reliving the scene
Without you to hold me I don’t know what I would do If you want to move closer I might like that too
Do you have a story to tell Something that happened today If you don’t feel like talking That’s also okay It makes me feel better Just to know that you’re near I hope it’s not a problem If I fall asleep right here
Without you to hold me I don’t know what I would do If you want to move closer I might like that too
Comments
That's really good. Couldn't tell you never tried writing this style before. It's really solid. Super memorable and relatable chorus. Nicely done.
You did it like a pro! Really like this style!