Runaway (Demo)
Skirmish: RUNAWAY (@corinnecurcio)Liner Notes
Thinking this could maybe be a transitory piece on #lp2 , maybe with Downcast. Dunno if I wanna make it a full song.
Should note, this is not from my perspective. At least, I hope not.
Lyrics
Em What would life be like if I ran away? Bm Would anyone care if I turned away? Em Paint my life different colors, shades of grey Bm Keep falling down this social decay
Am Runaway G Runaway Am Oh, runaway G Runaway
Comments
I like the idea of making it longer but I also do love a good short transitory song - they can add so much to an album and I think this could fit really well into that niche! It’s dark but really poignant.
I like this a lot (and I'm glad it's not from your perspective.) The lines painting your life in shades of grey and falling down in this social decay have a strong visual impact. I think this is a great basis for a full song if you decide you want to go that way.
Great start! I like the idea of "what would life be like if I ran away" I think you can play on that to fill out the lyric? maybe imagining the differences between the now and the possibilities? Don't know, but this has a tons of potential.
I get the feeling of hesitation here, of facing a decision point and not being able to choose a course of action. I really like the immediacy that goes with this frozen moment.