A Park Out in The West
by @willivey2
Skirmish: fold (@melodic)Liner Notes
My first song for Song Sprint and my first Skirmish! Decided not to use the word "fold" and was inspired by the definitions instead and came up with this song.
Lyrics
it started with a letter little postcard from a park out in the west you were looking for some canyons to photograph and sleep inside a tent and i should've known better then that you were gone
it had been a long time since I last heard you were traveling down the road i thought you'd hit a dead end and hoped that made you want to come back home and i should've known better then that you were gone
i tried before, to find you somehow and I found you there, in some quiet town and i asked you then, to follow me and you said no, just let me be and I should've known i should've known better than to let you go
it started with the mornings held on to one another oh so tight and though the sun was shining i still saw the sadness in your eyes and i should've known better then that you were gone
it ended on your birthday i thought we'd celebrate it for the night i baked you your favorite but you went to bed without a single bite and i should've known better then that you were gone
i tried before, to find you somehow and I found you there, in some quiet town and i asked you then, to follow me and you said no, just let me be and I should've known i should've known better than to let you go
it ended with a headline a hiker found dead in a park out in the west cause of death uncertain i cried because i knew before they did and i should've known better than to let you go and now i know and i should've known better than to let you go
Comments
Nice tapping beat! I like the held back vocal - sort of countyfied Elliot Smith/ Nice song very well skirmished
Aww, this is so lovely. Heartbreaking and upbeat at the same time, such a soft and welcoming melody.