FAWM: "A Song That Doesn’t Rhyme (update/demo)"

A Song That Doesn’t Rhyme (update/demo)

3 days ago by @zinglizh

Skirmish: Instability (@robinleaf)

A Song That Doesn’t Rhyme (update/demo)

zinglizh

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Liner Notes

#skirmish #instability @robinleaf coming in two days late as it took me two days to do it. ;) Your prompt was a good one for me to make a track to use with lyrics I wrote on #skirmish by @200ghosts That doesn't rhyme. Now I just need to hire the Moody Blues to record it!

Lyrics

In a world of filtered photographs Where laughter is rehearsed You sand away humanity With carefully chosen words

A voice that cracks, a note that quivers A pulse of truth in a plan that falters Life is most alive In a song that doesn’t rhyme

oooooooooooooooooo A song that doesn’t rhyme oooooooooooooooooo A song that doesn’t rhyme

Why polish up my messy dreams Like crystal bound to break Or hold it near the brightest light Searching for a scrape

A voice that cracks, a note that quivers A pulse of truth in a plan that falters Life is most alive In a song that doesn’t rhyme

oooooooooooooooooo A song that doesn’t rhyme oooooooooooooooooo A song that doesn’t rhyme

Perfection is a distant shore Dissolving like footprints in the foam Unattainable beyond the horizon And undesired

Life is most alive In a song that doesn’t rhyme oooooooooooooooooo A song that doesn’t rhyme oooooooooooooooooo A song that doesn’t rhyme

Comments

@200ghosts 1d

Love it! Great arrangement, really solid vocals. Excellent vibes.

@steveodell 2d

I like what you've done here interesting time signatures , good vocal good arraignment

@sunnymae 3d

very cool time signature for starts, add a super tension and intrigue to the lyrics. love your voice and theatrical performance, and the arrangement! I think the moody blues need to hire you! great harmonies and drama over all. "Life is most alive In a song that doesn’t rhyme" Amen to that! Fantastic piece!