Down On My Knees
by @casijohnson
Skirmish: Fall on your knees (@acousticmaddie)Liner Notes
Lyrics
[verse 1] You did it, you took him from me A poof in the sky, he left so easily We’re just kids, I scream why You just sit there, looking from the sky [verse 2] Give him back, I need my friend I had no warning, that night, would be the end I’m begging you, help me please I need my friend, I’m down on my knees [Chorus] I’m down on my knees I already said, Please I’m down on my knees Take me, please I’m down on my knees I’ll never be free I’m down on my knees Why, did he hit that tree I’m down on my knees… Help me, please… [Chorus] I’m down on my knees I already said, Please I’m down on my knees Take me, please I’m down on my knees I’ll never be free I’m down on my knees Why, did he hit that tree I’m down on my knees… Help me, please… [verse 3] On my knees, looking to the sky Tell me how, to say Good-Bye I wasn’t ready, for the end Falling apart, I lost my friend [Chorus] I’m down on my knees I already said, Please I’m down on my knees Take me, please I’m down on my knees I’ll never be free I’m down on my knees Why, did he hit that tree I’m down on my knees Help me, please I’m down on my knees… Help me, please….
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You address some of the big issues which can affect children deeply and you have approached it sensitively. good take on the prompt
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Nice lyric. I like the repetition in the chorus.. leaning into repetition in the words is very brave and the emphasis is awesome. I was so surprised by the "why did he hit that tree." line - then it all made sense.
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Wow that got stuck to my mind remembering my sons rabbit (who became 11years but still...) who was the one he told everything. Beautiful lyrics. Thank you for playing .