Scream
by @songwritingzen · @ajna1960
Liner Notes
Amanda says: This lyric was a wee bit of venting on my part !
Corey says: I reckon there was a bit of venting on my part as well trying to get this music recorded to this wonderful @ajna1960 lyric. I thought to myself... what would happen if I used every dirty, filthy metal based instrument plugin on this song. Well, what your hearing is the answer. It was a lot of fun but be careful if listening through headphones... It's LOUD!
Lyrics
Scream Words: ajna1960 Music: songwritingzen
Verse Invisible, waves flay my skin Leaves no mark, 'cept memory Of noise, livin’ in my head
Pre Chorus Wanna make some noise
Chorus Scream Let it out Pulverise th' air with my vocal chords Scream Let it out Stretchin' my mind let my body roar
Verse Impossible, myself unhinge Feel the pain, an’ joy there is ‘Til I'm fully sated
Pre Chorus Wanna make some noise
Chorus Scream Let it out Pulverise th' air with my vocal chords Scream Let it out Stretchin' my mind let my body roar
Bridge Cacophony of dissonance Counterpoint and rhythm Op-er-a of thought and sound Maelstrom full of venom In a heap of oozing notes Coloured beats an’ ancient drums I have succumbed I have succumbed
Solo (Verse)
Chorus Scream Let it out Pulverise th' air with my vocal chords Scream Let it out Stretchin' my mind let my body roar
Comments
AH! The frenetic guitar to start it off sets the tone and then when the singing starts, the near dissonance is perfect. Really well done.
There's something about the relentless guitar and the long octave vocal lines that reminds me of Dream Theater. Fun listen!
Transition from V - PC - Ch is awesome. Relentless driving beat. I may very well be randomly yelling "Wanna make some noise" for days. (and, I'm going to see friends play this morning, so I hope I don't get thrown out) I like what you did with the bridge. I think it's cool Amanda is becoming FAMN's go to metal lyricist 🎵 This was what I needed this morning.
Oh yeah a good lyric to blast out! got that loud words! Cracking chorus. Could sear you wee having fun , blasting one out! this is very cool indeed
Holy metal, Batman! This is SO COOL. I love everything about this—the lyrics, the frenzied guitar, the SCREAMING. So so good. an absolutely incredibly collab.